Mad Poet of the Year - Ray Greenblatt (November 2021)

The Mad Poet of the Year blog posts share the poetry of a long-time Mad Poet. This year-long appointment provides readers with a deep dive of the writer’s work and thoughts on poetry. We are thrilled to have Ray Greenblatt serve as the inaugural Mad Poet of the Year for 2021.


 
 

EXPERIMENT

 by Ray Greenblatt

The dog’s nose follows
          the rolling red ball
                   across the grass
                              snuffling up nuances of every blade
until it halts in a cluster of weeds
          as still and tantalizing as a bone
                    where she searches out other dogs’ messages
                              other animals’ secrets.

The taut string of the boy’s kite
         points straight at heaven
                     in a blue he never ever glimpsed before
                              where if he sights along that line
                                        he might discover new comets
                                                  bright shining planets
that will quench his many questions
           his constantly expanding world
                     when even a high-flying dove
                              will be a thrill
                                        will become an Eureka!

 

While you and I loll on a blanket
          on a smooth lawn at Valley Forge Park
                    among plump perspiring peaches
                              wandering aromas of brie and cheddar
                                        a half-empty bottle of fine Chilean cabernet
creating high-wires of words between us
          on which balance shaggy stories
                    newly hatching philosophies
                              a tight-rope of intimacy
                                        wrapping round us in ever-weaving coils
                                                  festooned with moments of love. 


 For me life is experiment and discovery. An animal does it by instinct; a child tests boundaries. Two adults in an intimate relationship keep developing individually, but at the same time they are working on mutual growth: love binds them. Where this poem takes place reinforces the idea of birth and growth on a national level.


Ray Greenblatt has been a poet for forty years and an English teacher longer than that. He was an editor of General Eclectic, a board member of the Philadelphia Writers Conference, and is presently on the staff of the Schuylkill Valley Journal. He has won the Full Moon Poetry Contest, the Mad Poets Annual Contest, and twice won the Anthony Byrne Annual Contest for Irish Poetry sponsored by The Irish Edition. His poetry has been translated into Gaelic, Polish, Greek and Japanese.